Me encantó de inicio a fin, el final de Popcorn, que fue el primero que probé, me dolió bastante, pero me encanta cómo se manejó la situación entre ellos dos y especialmente cómo se desarrolló Popcorn. Casi lloro porque fue tan bonito cómo solo se entendieron el uno al otro, y también porque no terminaron juntos, eso fue como una estaca al corazón, pero aún así me encanta. El mejor personaje y final (aunque desearía que terminaran juntos) personalmente para mí es el de Popcorn.
Luego fui a probar el final de Miyah y más o menos entiendo por qué y cómo terminó así, pero aún así me da lástima por ella. Me esperaba un final feliz para ella, donde no necesariamente termine con el MC pero sea una versión mejor de ella misma. Pero me imagino el porqué ella no terminó así en ese final. En general, me encantó todo. No he visto a los demás personajes al 100%, pero me encantan. Quisiera ver más sobre todos y además, de agregar que me causa un poco de gracia que si el protagonista no se mete en la vida de ninguno, las cosas les habrían ido mejor en general para al menos 3 personajes
Just finished the like actual game with all the characters, probably shouldn't have been playing it as much as i was, doing some back to back (though I wish i did Koey's as not the last one, it was fine and a happy note to end on cause i just did Miyah's before lmao) , but i also really wanted to see them all and see their futures with this. I really loved this, so much that i played this all in one night, also probably not a good idea but lol. I like that you didn't just give them all happily ever afters and make everything perfect, I like how Koey's and Doki's go together (kind of funny with the 'the correct choice' and 'the wrong choice' thing). I like how real all the stories were, I liked that even though Popcorn and the main character didnt end up staying together it showed Popcorn grow and try to better himself. I liked Likas, even if I want to imagine the rest of her friends wouldn't be so okay with what was going on, I've like related to it and it was great. Only one i didnt like was Miyahs, I don't know how to feel about her, it's not that i think it shouldnt have gone the route it did, i think it fits what happened before, if anything, I think it should've ended worse for the player, idk I feel like it would've closed a bit better. idk i just dont like her story in either game very much just like disturbing and uncomfortable, and despite not being a fan of it, I'm glad you did it, I'm glad it wasn't just going to really ignore how she was in the first part of the game and i liked how it made the main character even though if i disliked him more than i did normally (i spent the entirety of both parts of the game making fun of him, i like his character more in this but he is so easy to make fun of and thats not like saying hes poorly written i just like couldnt not make fun of him he was a goofball and silly at best and sometimes just a dickbag but i think it worked). Of this game's routes, Koey's was probably my favorite, perfect balance of bitter and sweet, also the new sprites in it are funny. lovely game and like idk ive been working on concepts for a game of my own since the fall and this like reignited a spark of imagination and like made me actually want to do it. I loved the stories and I find it crazy how attached i became to a handful of characters' stories i experienced for a couple of days, i do not think i will find a cuter or better game on this site.
ALSO the barley barely thing, i always thought it was a typo but a comment said something about it being a joke, regardless I kinda liked it and although its not liek anything to be upset about i think itdve been cute if kept in this one too
Hey there, thanks for the long comment! I really love any feedback I get, and this was especially insightful. The FA project, especially the epilogue, really came from the heart, so to know it touched you (and even inspired you???) in some ways really means a lot...
also as for the barley/barely thing... nah I legit just didn't know how to spell. At all. Ppl interpreted as a pun but I was just incapable of spelling the word correctly for some reason. I was more careful with the spelling and wording for the epilogue, being that it was a smaller scale project so, it was fixed. xD
Somewhat surprised you read through all that but :). also additionally sorry cause i wrote it like 15 minutes after finishing the epilogue and it was like so early in the morning lol. Even thouhg you said you don't plan on making another VN in another comment, I do look forward to seeing whatever else you make in the future! Also great game again i was going to say thank you for making it but that kind of sounds silly but thank you for making it lol
No plans for another visual novel at the moment, but I am making an animated short which features Popcorn and all the other characters. You can follow for updates on my Twitter: MoonieToonie
Ok, so i played like 25 diferents VN at the moment, all of them has the barrier character who never told anyone of he feels, its basically a cliche a this point. But some of this character have their diferrent side that make them special, and for me one of that was Popcorn i was like ok the building its short but fantastic it has everything i like, but in the epiloge when he say that hes not attracted to men that SHIT broke my heart. Anyways awesome game (My lack of ortography in the english language its awesome)
PD: Fuck 3 VN in a row that make me feel like shit after seeing the ending for the route that i chose.
I really was hoping for a better end for Miyah she doesn't deserve that ending it horrid and mean I really loved Miyah and to see her treated so badly is awful i know it Ur story and u make it how u wanted but still why not give those of us a version where she and the player are happily together?
If I had one word to describe the endings it would be bittersweet. I'll trust the content warning and not doing the Miyah route, and from checking the images in the folders, I think there might be something in the Gerald route too so I avoid it for the time being. I know its your story and all, but it kinda bummed me out how things just became this depressing with the characters I grown sort of attached to. Even the ones which end on a more positive note have this sadness to them, and felt the whole game in tone was a bit different from the previous one. I liked how the main character is more involved in the ingame pictures, and his personality was entertaining. Also, comparing the straight forwardness and lack of choices compared to the previous game is something I approve, as I still have the memories of brute forcing myself through those and that detracted from the experience.
Popcorn is still best boy, he shines especially in the Lika chapter
Thank you so much for the feedback! I appreciate you <3
I wanted to go with epilogues that would feel like the most likely scenario if the MC stayed with that character, and unfortunately, some of them wouldn't end in his favor...
Aughh the music is so GOOD! The visuals and all the new sprites are So Good! The writing is very real and great, except for the pun at the end of Koey's epilogue, which is instead brilliant. It all feels like a big playable cartoon, except this game's approach to plot writing feels very different from any cartoon i've seen. It's, like, PRECISELY half upbeat comedy cartoon, half heavy character conflict. I'm absolutely charmed by this game's writing. Thank you so much for making stuff, because the stuff you make is SO GOOD.
Thank you so much!!!!! Aahhghh man that really does mean a lot! Your in depth feedback to this project really motivates me to continue on, not only as an artist, but as a writer... thank you for commenting!
Just played through like, 3 endings, all I have to say is, Middle aged Gerard.
Just kidding, The endings I did do were great, and some kinda sad, but I did have a nice time playing and I can't wait to see anything else you make in the future
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Me encantó de inicio a fin, el final de Popcorn, que fue el primero que probé, me dolió bastante, pero me encanta cómo se manejó la situación entre ellos dos y especialmente cómo se desarrolló Popcorn. Casi lloro porque fue tan bonito cómo solo se entendieron el uno al otro, y también porque no terminaron juntos, eso fue como una estaca al corazón, pero aún así me encanta. El mejor personaje y final (aunque desearía que terminaran juntos) personalmente para mí es el de Popcorn.
Luego fui a probar el final de Miyah y más o menos entiendo por qué y cómo terminó así, pero aún así me da lástima por ella. Me esperaba un final feliz para ella, donde no necesariamente termine con el MC pero sea una versión mejor de ella misma. Pero me imagino el porqué ella no terminó así en ese final. En general, me encantó todo. No he visto a los demás personajes al 100%, pero me encantan. Quisiera ver más sobre todos y además, de agregar que me causa un poco de gracia que si el protagonista no se mete en la vida de ninguno, las cosas les habrían ido mejor en general para al menos 3 personajes
Just finished the like actual game with all the characters, probably shouldn't have been playing it as much as i was, doing some back to back (though I wish i did Koey's as not the last one, it was fine and a happy note to end on cause i just did Miyah's before lmao) , but i also really wanted to see them all and see their futures with this. I really loved this, so much that i played this all in one night, also probably not a good idea but lol. I like that you didn't just give them all happily ever afters and make everything perfect, I like how Koey's and Doki's go together (kind of funny with the 'the correct choice' and 'the wrong choice' thing). I like how real all the stories were, I liked that even though Popcorn and the main character didnt end up staying together it showed Popcorn grow and try to better himself. I liked Likas, even if I want to imagine the rest of her friends wouldn't be so okay with what was going on, I've like related to it and it was great. Only one i didnt like was Miyahs, I don't know how to feel about her, it's not that i think it shouldnt have gone the route it did, i think it fits what happened before, if anything, I think it should've ended worse for the player, idk I feel like it would've closed a bit better. idk i just dont like her story in either game very much just like disturbing and uncomfortable, and despite not being a fan of it, I'm glad you did it, I'm glad it wasn't just going to really ignore how she was in the first part of the game and i liked how it made the main character even though if i disliked him more than i did normally (i spent the entirety of both parts of the game making fun of him, i like his character more in this but he is so easy to make fun of and thats not like saying hes poorly written i just like couldnt not make fun of him he was a goofball and silly at best and sometimes just a dickbag but i think it worked). Of this game's routes, Koey's was probably my favorite, perfect balance of bitter and sweet, also the new sprites in it are funny. lovely game and like idk ive been working on concepts for a game of my own since the fall and this like reignited a spark of imagination and like made me actually want to do it. I loved the stories and I find it crazy how attached i became to a handful of characters' stories i experienced for a couple of days, i do not think i will find a cuter or better game on this site.
ALSO the barley barely thing, i always thought it was a typo but a comment said something about it being a joke, regardless I kinda liked it and although its not liek anything to be upset about i think itdve been cute if kept in this one too
Hey there, thanks for the long comment! I really love any feedback I get, and this was especially insightful. The FA project, especially the epilogue, really came from the heart, so to know it touched you (and even inspired you???) in some ways really means a lot...
also as for the barley/barely thing... nah I legit just didn't know how to spell. At all. Ppl interpreted as a pun but I was just incapable of spelling the word correctly for some reason. I was more careful with the spelling and wording for the epilogue, being that it was a smaller scale project so, it was fixed. xD
Somewhat surprised you read through all that but :). also additionally sorry cause i wrote it like 15 minutes after finishing the epilogue and it was like so early in the morning lol. Even thouhg you said you don't plan on making another VN in another comment, I do look forward to seeing whatever else you make in the future! Also great game again i was going to say thank you for making it but that kind of sounds silly but thank you for making it lol
Will there ever be more content to get more Popcorn cuteness?
No plans for another visual novel at the moment, but I am making an animated short which features Popcorn and all the other characters. You can follow for updates on my Twitter: MoonieToonie
Oh god my heart. I've never gotten so attached to a character in a visual novel before as much as I have to Lika, and this ending destroyed me.
Ok, so i played like 25 diferents VN at the moment, all of them has the barrier character who never told anyone of he feels, its basically a cliche a this point. But some of this character have their diferrent side that make them special, and for me one of that was Popcorn i was like ok the building its short but fantastic it has everything i like, but in the epiloge when he say that hes not attracted to men that SHIT broke my heart. Anyways awesome game (My lack of ortography in the english language its awesome)
PD: Fuck 3 VN in a row that make me feel like shit after seeing the ending for the route that i chose.
I really was hoping for a better end for Miyah she doesn't deserve that ending it horrid and mean I really loved Miyah and to see her treated so badly is awful i know it Ur story and u make it how u wanted but still why not give those of us a version where she and the player are happily together?
crushed, absolutely destroyed, eviscerated even
If I had one word to describe the endings it would be bittersweet. I'll trust the content warning and not doing the Miyah route, and from checking the images in the folders, I think there might be something in the Gerald route too so I avoid it for the time being. I know its your story and all, but it kinda bummed me out how things just became this depressing with the characters I grown sort of attached to. Even the ones which end on a more positive note have this sadness to them, and felt the whole game in tone was a bit different from the previous one. I liked how the main character is more involved in the ingame pictures, and his personality was entertaining. Also, comparing the straight forwardness and lack of choices compared to the previous game is something I approve, as I still have the memories of brute forcing myself through those and that detracted from the experience.
Popcorn is still best boy, he shines especially in the Lika chapter
Thank you so much for the feedback! I appreciate you <3
I wanted to go with epilogues that would feel like the most likely scenario if the MC stayed with that character, and unfortunately, some of them wouldn't end in his favor...
thank you for playing!
Aughh the music is so GOOD! The visuals and all the new sprites are So Good! The writing is very real and great, except for the pun at the end of Koey's epilogue, which is instead brilliant. It all feels like a big playable cartoon, except this game's approach to plot writing feels very different from any cartoon i've seen. It's, like, PRECISELY half upbeat comedy cartoon, half heavy character conflict. I'm absolutely charmed by this game's writing. Thank you so much for making stuff, because the stuff you make is SO GOOD.
KOEY MY BELOVED
Thank you so much!!!!! Aahhghh man that really does mean a lot! Your in depth feedback to this project really motivates me to continue on, not only as an artist, but as a writer... thank you for commenting!
doki's epilogue hurt me
thanks game
well now im miserable
good game
Miyah's story. Damn.
Just played through like, 3 endings, all I have to say is, Middle aged Gerard.
Just kidding, The endings I did do were great, and some kinda sad, but I did have a nice time playing and I can't wait to see anything else you make in the future
Thank you kindly ❤ your feedback means the world to me
wow cool
I saw this was posted and pulled a moist critikal reaction.
LETS FUCKING GOO BABYY